Pitch Feedback

In the lesson we presented our pitch to the rest of the group. This is our feedback:

"Good use of conventions of a realist drama. The way we have thought about lighting and sound in our sequence. We have thought about the problems that happen everyday and used them to produce an idea for a sequence"

"Good representation of social realism"

"Good research. We have thought clearly about where we are going to film and thought about having permission to film in a shop. "